So here is page 2. It was totally redrawn as the characters were way off model and didn't really have the right proportions for "cuteness". I was going to have Ellie reading a book about adventure such as Huckleberry Finn. I could never decide on which book to use so thought it was better to leave it up to the reader. I'm surprised I let Burnie's nose make the honk sound. This a comic. It's serious! I'm glad I did however.